The February Schmooze was awesome.
We met in a
different location and we apologize for the changes, but we do not have a
permanent space yet.
Many of us had
reached the goals we set the last month. The threat of having to pay into the kitty
served as good incentive.
The topic BEST WRITING DEVICES AND STRATEGIES:
FOUR GREAT
PERSPECTIVES WERE SHARED:
1) EILEEN
WESSON: shared “WRITING FROM THE MIND OF A CHILD AWAKENS OUT PLAYFUL NATURE
AS WRITERS.” She passed out paper and pastels and asked us to scribble and smudge
colors however (not to think of it as
“drawing.”) This revealed our unconscious,
which we then interpreted through the eyes of a young child. Somehow I ended up
with an abstract Ferris wheel – I’d been to the one in Santa Monica a few days
before. I felt the joy a young child feels from the thrill of these sky-high
adventures – when I put my mind to thinking of it this way, with guidance of
Eileen. And I could not have been in need of this reminder more, for my
personal life is a bit heavy right now, with a slow, draw out death of a family
member lingering in the near future. It will help my writing too – that goes
without saying! But I am a firm believer in the ALL THINGS ARE CONNECTED
theory. Whatever helps your overall state of mind as a writer is key – a key to
a happy, healthy writing life. So many writers of adult literature were
tortured, why is that? If we write for kids, we need to feel the same joy they
do – and BOY, DO KIDS FEEL JOY!! It is a basic NEED for them, almost a strong
as their love for sugar;)
2) TRACY
HOLCZER: shared two papers on “EFFECTIVE CHARACTER BIOS AND HOW TO
DETERMINE THE HEROES PROBLEM/GOALS, ETC.” What is the inciting incident that
begins the story? What happened previously to knock their world out of
alignment? This is important back story – “baggage” that has affected the main
character’s personality negatively. Some call this the character flaw, but I
like Tracy’s way of putting it because she emphasizes that an event in the not
too distant past has caused this. Think: the mother’s death in SARAH, PLAIN AND
TALL.
3) JEAN
PERRY: gave us “TECHNIQUES TO HELP IDENTIFY WORLD- CHARACTER-PLOT IN NOVELS.”
She passed out highlighted passages – to isolate the various types of writing.
World building writing is descriptive; character and plot are pretty clear. This
was fascinating!
4) DEBORAH
FLETCHER BLUM: discussed “ADVICE TO WRITING SELF” which included trusting
your instincts.
All in all in
was a great schmooze.
THANK YOU TO
EVERYONE WHO PARTICIPATED!!!
<<<<<<<<MARCH
LOCATION is once again new and different>>>>>
The next
Hollywood schmooze will be MARCH 21st check the listserv for the new location.
Thanks and we
look forward to seeing you!
Thanks for the recap, Deborah! I had really wanted to attend this Schmooze and couldn't make it.
ReplyDeleteHere is the writing tip I would have brought, that has most helped me: In a SCBWI Summer Conference master class taught by Linda Sue Park, she suggested we telescope our hands to our eyes (one hand to one eye, the other eye closed) in order to picture the best order in which action, dialogue, or maybe scene details are shown through our writing's "camera." Through writing we can only convey (and, as readers, perceive) one thing at a time, so what is the best order for all of that info to come across?
When we asked Linda Sue Park questions, we could see her sometimes putting her hand-camera to her eye in order to answer. Now when I write, I do it all the time.
Would love to hear more tips! Keep 'em coming, folks! :D
Rita
Love this idea!
DeleteI do hope to come to one soon! Sorry I missed this one! Will try for March. :)
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