Blog - Hollywood Schmooze, SCBWI April 25
by: Kerry Liu
April 25th was the Hollywood Schmooze Manuscript Critique organized by Rene Rawls at the home of Rhonda Hayter.
1. Rhonda Hayter / Night Road - Visuals and high conflict situation, I'm looking forward to the entire saga!
I look forward to our next schmooze and continued growth and success for each of these talented writers.
Over a cup of Rhonda's mint tea, our hostess started up the writer's critique with NIGHT ROAD, dripping with drama and tension, I was at the seat of my pants listening to evil prevail in the slave labour days of the South. With out giving this page turner away, it opens with a Kaboom as a mother is sold by a slaveowner. I was rooting for redemption for her kids.
Flying through coverage critique with the help of Rene Rawls, writers were given the rules before arrival. Each submission would be given 8 minutes for feedback.
While giving feedback, something "new" would be added by each writer to build upon each person's critique.
Highlight of the evening was a visit by Kathy McCullough who is launching her second book in the magic series, WHO NEEDS MAGIC? (Random House/Delacorte Press)
Her book release party will be at Barnes and Noble at the Grove July 13, 2013 and what a dream, the jacket cover is enchanting and expresses the reverie of having magical fairy godmother that grants wishes.
The manuscripts that were covered included a variety of subject matter, crystal healing, magic, stars, animal farms, grandmas, martians, slavery, Africa, boys, and dolls.
Flying through coverage critique with the help of Rene Rawls, writers were given the rules before arrival. Each submission would be given 8 minutes for feedback.
While giving feedback, something "new" would be added by each writer to build upon each person's critique.
Highlight of the evening was a visit by Kathy McCullough who is launching her second book in the magic series, WHO NEEDS MAGIC? (Random House/Delacorte Press)
Her book release party will be at Barnes and Noble at the Grove July 13, 2013 and what a dream, the jacket cover is enchanting and expresses the reverie of having magical fairy godmother that grants wishes.
The manuscripts that were covered included a variety of subject matter, crystal healing, magic, stars, animal farms, grandmas, martians, slavery, Africa, boys, and dolls.
1. Rhonda Hayter / Night Road - Visuals and high conflict situation, I'm looking forward to the entire saga!
2. Deborah Fletcher Blum/ HABARI KENYA, LIZZIE STRASSWEILER - What girl doesn't dream of being this girl who moves to Africa? I have a good feeling about this book!
3. Bonnie Berry LaMon/ Last Minute McKenzie - There's nothing last minute about McKenzie, love this heroine!
4. Cheryl Manning/ LITTLE RED RECESS/A Martian Adventure In Haiku - Sweet, flowing, poetry in Martian heaven!
5. Jean Perry/ Chapter One: Early September-Morning - An ode to scrappy rock teens who live on a shoestring and survive by the skin of their teeth!
6. Eileen Wesson/ The Little Star Who Came to Earth - Dreams are a wish that stars make come true!
7. Frances Palladino/ Pepper’s Starry Farm - Old MacDonald and Starry Night come together with the help of Pepper!
8. Demetrius Calip/THE GYMBRATS “TWEEN OF NEW YORK” - Who doesn't want to know how crystals help chaotic characters from colliding in a city?
9. Maria Oka/ Zuzu’s Day Out - If you lose Clementine, you don't get her back, unless you have the help of many things!
10. Kerry Liu/ Why Herman Brushes in Teeth - Candy, Cavities, and Cloning, what doesn't sugar do to you?
11. Tania Lieman/Marlene Mavreen, Mutant Queen - This dialogue is a blast, smart female characters always have a secret language!
I look forward to our next schmooze and continued growth and success for each of these talented writers.
Thanks for the mention, Kerry! I had a good time and enjoyed reading everyone's submissions. :)
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