April 25th was the Hollywood Schmooze Manuscript Critique organized by Rene Rawls at the home of Rhonda Hayter.
Over a cup of Rhonda's mint tea, our hostess started up the writer's critique with NIGHT ROAD, dripping with drama and tension, I was at the seat of my pants listening to evil prevail in the slave labour days of the South. With out giving this page turner away, it opens with a Kaboom as a mother is sold by a slaveowner. I was rooting for redemption for her kids.
Flying through coverage critique with the help of Rene Rawls, writers were given the rules before arrival. Each submission would be given 8 minutes for feedback. While giving feedback, something "new" would be added by each writer to build upon each person's critique.
Highlight of the evening was a visit by Kathy McCullough who is launching her second book in the magic series, WHO NEEDS MAGIC? (Random House/Delacorte Press) Her book release party will be at Barnes and Noble at the Grove July 13, 2013 and what a dream, the jacket cover is enchanting and expresses the reverie of having magical fairy godmother that grants wishes.
The manuscripts that were covered included a variety of subject matter, crystal healing, magic, stars, animal farms, grandmas, martians, slavery, Africa, boys, and dolls.
1.Rhonda Hayter / Night Road - Visuals and high conflict situation, I'm looking forward to the entire saga!
2.Deborah Fletcher Blum/ HABARI KENYA, LIZZIE STRASSWEILER - What girl doesn't dream of being this girl who moves to Africa? I have a good feeling about this book!
3.Bonnie Berry LaMon/ Last Minute McKenzie - There's nothing last minute about McKenzie, love this heroine!
4.Cheryl Manning/ LITTLE RED RECESS/A Martian Adventure In Haiku - Sweet, flowing, poetry in Martian heaven!
5.Jean Perry/ Chapter One: Early September-Morning - An ode to scrappy rock teens who live on a shoestring and survive by the skin of their teeth!
6.Eileen Wesson/ The Little Star Who Came to Earth - Dreams are a wish that stars make come true!
7.Frances Palladino/ Pepper’s Starry Farm - Old MacDonald and Starry Night come together with the help of Pepper!
8.Demetrius Calip/THE GYMBRATS “TWEEN OF NEW YORK” - Who doesn't want to know how crystals help chaotic characters from colliding in a city?
9.Maria Oka/ Zuzu’s Day Out - If you lose Clementine, you don't get her back, unless you have the help of many things!
10.Kerry Liu/ Why Herman Brushes in Teeth - Candy, Cavities, and Cloning, what doesn't sugar do to you?
11.Tania Lieman/Marlene Mavreen, Mutant Queen - This dialogue is a blast, smart female characters always have a secret language!
I look forward to our next schmooze and continued growth and success for each of these talented writers.
Temple Beth Am (Pressman): From the Head Of School
March 5, 2013/23 Adar 5773 | From the Head of School
Dear Parent(s),
Please find a copy of the tentative calendar for the upcoming 2013-2014 school year attached to this e-mail. I want to share with you how Pressman Academy establishes its calendar and what factors go into the decision-making process.
Our school calendar is usually set using the day after Labor Day as a starting point and the start of Camp Ramah’s season as an ending point. We value both Jewish tradition and the American society in which we live and take an active role. This principle is reflected in the days that the school is closed and in the days that we take as early dismissal in preparation for the Jewish holidays. In addition, the school confers with other Jewish day schools and independent schools to survey start and end dates for the school year.
For 2013-2014, the Academy will begin classes on Monday, August 26, 2013, with Health and Safety Day and short visits for all the students, ECC through Middle School.* The first full day of school will be on August 27, 2013. We have set the calendar this way because Labor Day and Rosh Ha-Shanah both fall during the first week of September which necessitated an earlier start date than usual. The first week of September will be a vacation week with school resuming the following week. The school year will culminate on June 18, 2014.
As we do each year, three days have been designated for professional development for our faculty. We know that this scheduling can create hardships for parents, and are keenly sensitive to your need to make special arrangements. We believe strongly that professional development days enhance the quality of education at Pressman Academy, as well as our ability to attract and retain the outstanding faculty that is a hallmark of our program. We take as our model other excellent Jewish day schools and independent schools in our area and nationally who consider professional development to be a key component in the quality of their programs. Two national organizations that the school works with, Independent School Management (ISM) and the Partnership for Excellence in Jewish Education (PEJE), rank professional development as one of the key markers of excellence for private schools.
We are also sensitive to the number of school days that we have each year. We strive to be in the range of other Solomon Schechter Jewish day schools with respect to the number of days we are in session. While this number may be fewer than non-Jewish private independent schools and public schools, the number of instructional hours we have each day and year is similar or greater.
Our calendar represents the mission, values, and educational goals of the school and balances these with practical concerns. In August, you will receive a one page final version of the calendar along with our yearly summer mailing. In addition, our calendar will be available in August online at www.pressmanacademy.org for download to your PDA.
Sincerely,
Rabbi Mitchel Malkus
Head of School
*All ECC transition classes may begin September 9th and we will notify those parents in the early summer Click here for a PDF of the file.
We’ve been a little remiss here at Schmooze Central.Okay.More than a little.A LOT remiss.It’s been
three whole Schmoozes with no blog posts.(We know, you’re crushed,
right??) We have an awesome…or dare we say WAY COOL blog post on the November
Schmooze, but that’s still a work-in-progress—
—and speaking of works in progress,
did you know the SCBWI has a bunch of awesome Work-In-Progress grants?Read all about the different grants and
their submission guidelines on the "grants and awards" page at www.scbwi.org.Applications are accepted between February 15th and March 15th
– so don’t delay!!
Where were we?Oh, right!The Way Cool
post is going to be Way Late but in the interim, we have this December/January
recap which is all about AWESOME books!
First up, in December, we welcomed back the venerable Diane
Applebaum, longtime bookseller (now retired) from Children’s Book World.It had been a few years since Diane had
come and schooled us on what’s hot, what’s not and what’s missing from the Kid Lit
landscape – at least from a bookseller's POV.
Photo: Rita Crayon Huang
Here's a taste of some of the general tidbits she shared:
Robots,
superheroes, cowboys/cowgirls, mermaids, unicorns, fairies, knights,
construction stories & dinosaurs simply never get old
Kids
love joke books – especially of the “knock, knock” ilk
There
can never be too many ballet books
Middle
grade readers need ADVENTURE
The
current trend for YA readers is fantasy, fantasy, fantasy
Historical
fiction often does quite well
Non-fiction
is HOT
Of course, Diane brought many wonderful books to “show-and
tell” us about.(She apologized
for focusing primarily on picture books.)She mentioned the following books that were both delightful and in high
demand:
Silly
Doggie written and illustrated by Adam
Stower
Pluto
Visits Earth written by Steve Metzger,
illustrated by Jared D. Lee
King
Arthur’s Very Great Grandson written
and illustrated by Kenneth Kraegel
Vampirina
Ballerina written by Anne Marie Pace,
illustrated by LeUyen Pham
A
Kiss Means I Love You written by Kathryn
Madeline Allen, photographs Eric Fultran
Just
Being Audrey written by Margaret
Cardillo, illustrated by Julia Denos
My
Heart Will Not Sit Down written by
Mara Rockliff, illustrated by Ann Tanksley
The
Quiet Place written by Sarah Stewart,
illustrated by David Small
And perhaps most
useful to us Schmoozers was Diane’s list of subject matter that seems to be in
short supply and/or is always needed:
Divorce
(as experienced by little kids)
Moving
– kids or their neighborhood friends having to move
Going
to a new school (especially elementary)
Family
member going to the hospital for a non-life-threatening issue
Death
of a pet has been done well – but there is always room for more good
stories about this (it’s like ballet and dinosaurs in that respect!)
Alternative
households
Books
on nutrition - but the trick is to avoid being didactic
Timeless
photojournalism books (babies love looking at pictures of babies!)
A couple of other cool things Diane mentioned were…
There’s
a fun new movement in poetry for boys... Guyku – haiku for guys.Check it out here:http://www.hmhbooks.com/guyku/
In January, the focus was once again on Great Books.And not just great books but A Few Of Our Favorite Books!
Intros featured the standard “name and what you write” but
also what book you’d like to have zapped from your memory so that you could
experience reading it for the first time again (we all have them!).
Some titles mentioned were:
Gone
With the Wind written by Margaret
Mitchell
The Harry
Potter series, written by J.K. Rowling
The
Giver, written by Lois Lowry
Dune, written by Frank Herbert
Pride
and Prejudice, written by Jane Austen
Charlie
and the Chocolate Factory, written by
Roald Dahl
A
Wrinkle in Time, written by Madeleine
L ‘Engle
Then, the Schmooze kicked off with a very moving, highly
personal and rather lengthy (some might say indulgent) story from Karol about how
she’d come across the favorite book she’d brought to share, Newbery Honor book
Incident at Hawk’s Hill, written by
Allan W. Eckert and illustrated by John Schoenherr.Karol had been introduced to the book, in a very round-about way, through her oldest sister, Jane. The point – and Karol did have one – was that books that truly
move and entertain us can sometimes come from unlikely places.
Charlie put the question to the group:How do we come across our favorite
books?Answers varied. Recommendations from
friends, teacher etc., book reviews, our parents reading to us as children, new
titles from our favorite authors and even book covers (by which, apparently,
you sometimes can judge a book) were
mentioned.
Charlie presented his favorite, The Book Of Lost Things, by
John Connolly, a book about the power of
stories and fairy tales, and asked the group, “What do we go to books
for?”Responses ranged from
lighthearted escapism/wish-fulfillment to connection and inspiration, a desire
to relate to “underdog” or marginalized characters, to feel community with
others and even to help us figure out stuff in our own lives.Unable to allow others to find joy in
the lighthearted, Charlie sniffed that there was no such thing as escapism and
that, in fact, those books were actually about deeper, darker and more personal
issues than could be faced in more prosaic works.Most Schmoozers smiled indulgently (not without a touch of
pity), cleared their throats, and moved on…
Clearly, good books play an extremely important role in our
lives – however we happen to come across them and whatever value we ultimately get from them.
So what were a few of
the Schmoozers favorite books?
!The
Girl Who Could Fly, written by Victoria
Forester
!Shatter
Me, written by Tahereh Malfi
!Obstinate
Pen, written by Frank W. Dormer
!For
Love For Mother Not, written by Alan Dean
Foster
!The
Magician’s Nephew, written by C.S. Lewis
!Holes, written by Louis Sachar
!Hitchhiker’s
Guide to the Galaxy, written by Douglas
Adams
!Professor
Wormbog in Search for the Zipperrump-a-Zoo,
written and illustrated by Mercer Mayer
!The
Magician’s Elephant, written by Kate
DiCamillo
!The
Night Circus, written by Erin Morgenstern
!Yips
and Yankah (this is a very popular Dutch
kids book series and we at Schmooze Central could not find the author – our
apologies!)
!Snark
Out Boys and the Avocado of Death, written
by Daniel Pinkwater
!What
My Mother Doesn’t Know, written by Sonya
Sones
!The
Underneath, written by Kathi Appelt
!Whale
Talk, written by Chris Crutcher
!The
Silly Book, written and illustrated by Stoo
Hample
Naturally, Dr. Seuss was an entity unto himself.The Sneeches and
Other Stories, One
Fish Two Fish Red Fish Blue Fish, Thidwick the Big-Hearted Moose, Bartholomew
and the Oobleck, McElligot’s Pool and My
Book About Me were some of the Seussfavorites mentioned.
Feel free to add MORE favorite books in the comments!
Of course, we’re forgetting one very special part of the Favorite Books Schmooze –
the SINGING!!!
As any of you who read the description of the January 2013
Schmooze know, the possibility (some would say threat) of the first-ever Schmooze Sing–Along was
mentioned.And we “made it so,”
fine Schmoozers!
For any of you
who missed the Schmooze or came late (whether intentionally or not), here’s
your chance to sing-along with the gang!
These Are a Few Of Our Favorite Books
Charlotte and Katniss and Christopher Robin
Bus-driving pigeons and bank-owning goblins
Thousands of pages of Edward’s good looks
These are a few of our favorite books
Picture book classics that signal our bedtimes
Colorful pictures and fanciful end rhymes
Middle-grade fantasies, YAs with hooks
These are a few of our favorite books
Stories that take us to new awesome places
Make us feel happy, put smiles on our faces
Hardbacks and board books and Kindles and Nooks
Each format works for our favorite books
When the muse leaves
Lost my car keys
Day job is a drag
I simply start reading a favorite book
And then I don't feel so bad
Schmoozers pose with their fa-vor-ite books! Photo: Rita Crayon Huang
Who knows?Maybe we’ll have a Schmooze Sing-Along EVERY month!!OK…maybe not.
Next up - just in time for the day-before-Valentine’s, join us on
Wednesday, February 13th for…Fifty Shades of Schmooze: The Sex
Schmooze!
(Any Schmoozers caught tittering or blushing will be mocked
ruthlessly.)