Thursday, March 19, 2015

What to Expect When You're Expecting...the Recap on the Westside Writers AWESOME New Authors Panel!


This month, Schmooze Central hands the reins over to the delightful Cassandra Federman.  Take it away, Cassandra!!




On Wednesday March 11th, the Westside Writers Schmooze spoke with five published (that’s right, PUBLISHED) authors! Our panelists included:

-       Edith Cohn – Middle Grade Author, Sprit’s Key
-       Nicole Maggi – YA Author, The Forgetting and Winter Falls, (First book in the Twin Willows Trilogy)
-       Kirk Jay Mueller – Picture Books Author, Harriet Can Carry It
-       Sue Ganz Schmitt – Picture Book Author, Planet Kindergarten, The Princess and the Peanut, and Even Superheroes Get Diabetes
-       Tracy Holczer – Middle Grade Author, The Secret Hum of a Daisy

Interesting side note:  by way of a super-happy coincidence, the five authors participating in the panel had vastly different experiences on their paths to getting published.

Let’s begin the Q & A!
(Disclaimer: Answers are paraphrased and should not be considered direct quotes.)

How did you all get your agents? And how did you know they were right for you?

EC – Has had three agents.  As she improved her writing, she “upgraded” her agents.
She used Publishers Marketplace to see who was selling Middle Grade books well. The top 10 MG agents were her targets!
            “Go to workshops!” She met her current rep through the Highlights Foundation Whole Novel Workshop.

NM – Has had the same agent for 10 years! Nicole’s agent helped her discover her voice as a YA author. They met at the Historical Novel Society Conference. She also recommended attending conferences, “They help you get off the slush pile.”

KJM – Doesn’t have an agent. He went to publishers directly and made sure to cite his experience as a teacher for over 30 years. (Use whatever edge you have!)
He made the mistake of sending out his manuscript before it was ready. It got rejected. Then he reworked it, selected 4 more publishing houses, and got it published by Star Bright Books.
Now his book is in Barnes and Noble and Kirk is over the moon!

SGS – Self-published two books on her own: The Princess and the Peanut and Even Superheroes Get Diabetes. She worked in marketing for years and knew she could sell these books without an agent because they had a niche market. (That’s the best situation for self-publishing. Make sure to have a niche book, then go to the big companies involved in that niche and sell lots of copies to them!)
For her third book, Planet Kindergarten, Sue wanted an agent. She reached out to friends over social media. That didn’t work out great. Then she selected 40 agents and reached out to them. That failed too. She reached out again over social media and finally struck gold. “Don’t give up!”

TH – After years of writing, she finally wrote a book that matched her taste. It was at that point she knew she could reach out to agents.
            She searched SCBWI for blog posts, interviews, and anything that had to do with agents. She read and researched A LOT!
She also used Query Tracker to make sure she targeted the agents that were right for her book.
            “Timing and luck is a big part of when you sell.”

What was it like when an offer was made?
Schmoozers listen with rapt attention to
the stories of the "big moment."

EC – Just got an email. The book had been on submission for 4 months.
She controls how much info her agent gives her about where they are in the submission process. She doesn’t want to hear if her book is getting rejected or if it is close to going to acquisitions. She only wants good news once it is definite.

“GOING TO ACQUISITIONS” is when editors take the book to their bosses and sell them on the idea. Oftentimes the book goes to committee (editorial committee) first, then to acquisitions, where they discuss the potential sales and marketing.

NM – Winter Falls was on submission for 6 months before they decided to go with a smaller press called Medallion Media. Medallion bought the first book in the trilogy. They bought the second and third soon after.
The Forgetting was only on submission for 2 months.
Agents send the book out to all their connections first, then to smaller presses. If it doesn’t sell, then you and your agent may decide to discuss self-publishing.

KJM – Got an email directly, since he had no agent. He cautions writers to make sure their manuscript is as good as it can be before sending it out and burning contacts.

SGS – Made sure to retain all Film/TV rights in her contract, as she wants her book to become a TV series.

TH – Got an email informing her of the two-book deal. When your agent recommends a deal, you take it (however you feel about two-book deals). Doesn’t mind hearing about rejections.

How much editing and adjusting do your agents/editors do? What’s the editing process like and how much time do you get for revisions?

EC – Got big picture adjustments first and was given one month. Then went through 5 more turnarounds, each allowing 2-3 weeks for changes.

NM – Got 3 weeks to turnaround The Forgetting, then it was done!
Winter Falls had already gone through 18 months of notes with another publishing company before the book was dropped and it went to Medallion. Not many adjustments were needed at that point because so much had already been done.

KJM – Only got notes on specific words, but no major changes.

SGS – Agent helped with some minor edits. Once they got an offer, she went through 2 more months of editing.

TH – Agent helped with big picture edits. First edit was 11 pages of notes from her editor, and she was given 3 months to turn it around. The editor helped with small details over the course of two more large-scale edits. Then it went to copyedits (to check for typos, facts, consistency of rules in your story, etc.)

COPY EDITING is the last place authors can make major changes to their books. After copy editing comes FIRST PASS PAGES, usually given to the author in PDF format. Once authors get these pages, they cannot make big changes because the book is formatted for printing purposes. Typos can be fixed, but nothing can be done that would extend text onto a new line.]


How did you end up with your illustrators? How did that process work?

KJM – Sent his publisher a DETAILED list of art notes, which he didn't know was a major faux pas. He is grateful they chose the amazingly talented artist, Sarah Vonthron-Laver, whose illustrations are absolutely wonderful! 

SGS – Received a list of potential illustrators to choose from. Since she wants her book become a TV series, she selected an illustrator who was also an animator. The one she chose wasn’t available for 7 years, so she suggested an illustrator/animator that she’d met at an SCBWI conference. He was available and it worked out!

EC – Got a say in her cover artist. She liked the artist who did Doll Bones and they were able to get her. (The artist, Eliza Wheeler, is a member of SCBWI right here in LA!)

Tell us about the marketing process. How much do you have to do and how much does the publicist help?

EC – Your editor sometimes helps get blurbs from other authors you wouldn’t otherwise be able to get. Blurbs are very important and helpful to new authors.
They are great to have for promotion if your trade reviews take awhile to come.

Fall is the worst time for a debut author’s book to come out. They get overlooked, as it is the time of year when well-known authors release their books. It is also harder to get blurbs from other authors at this time.

Our esteemed panelists - many thanks!
NM – Publishers send out ARCs (Advanced Reader Copy) to get reviews and blurbs.

KJM Does presentations at various schools, since he has lots of connections there. His publishing Company, Star Bright Books, is on the East Coast, and has been very supportive and helpful by marketing and promoting his book worldwide.

SGS – “The amount of promotion/marketing you have to do with a self-published book and a traditionally published book is the same, except with traditionally published books, they take care of all the big stuff.”
She did a flashmob book launch at Barnes and Noble!
            She also created a book trailer by hiring someone off of Fiverr.com, a FANTASTIC marketing tool! “You can hire anyone on there to create something for you for only five dollars.” Make sure you draw up a contract and retain the rights of whatever you have created.

NM – Smaller houses can be great for marketing. They have fewer books and you receive more attention from the publicist.

TH – Told her publicist that she was going to the ALA (American Library Association conference) with her debut group, and they offered a signing at the Penguin Booth. It’s definitely worth asking for these types of events even if it’s not part of the official publicity campaign. She paid for it herself, but they loved the idea.
            Follow the Nerdy Book Club on Twitter. They are an influential group of librarians and teachers!

All the authors print their own postcards, business cards, and other marketing materials. “Build a good relationship with the poor, overworked publicists!” Help them by self-promoting and coming up with inventive ways they can help you! You want them to love you!

That about wraps up the Published Authors Q & A.  Hopefully, you learned more about the process of publication and picked up some useful tools for the future!


Cassandra Federman
HUGE thanks to (the really rather lovely, doncha think?) Cassandra Federman  taking copious notes during the panel and somehow wrangling an amazing amount of info into this blog post! Charlie had to take to his bed even thinking about the effort involved. And when he saw how concise and informative her writing was, he seriously considered a move to Borneo. However, given that this would have required him figuring out where Borneo was, he chose instead to roll over and go back to sleep until the next schmooze.

Be sure to join us for the next Schmooze on Wednesday April 15th where—

We Interrupt Our Traditional Publishing Trajectory…

            --We’ll explore eBooks, aps, self-publishing and other new-fangled and fabulous ways of getting to your readers.

***PLEASE NOTE:  The April’s Schmooze has been pushed to 3rd week due to Passover.  This in no way implies that the fact that it is both Charlie and Karol’s birthday month should be “passed over.”

Until then, keep passing the open windows,

Charlie & Karol (…and Cassandra!)

Wednesday, March 4, 2015

Romance Novels: YA Style




In honor of Valentine’s Day our February meeting found Hollywood Schmoozers reading and analyzing Young Adult romance novels. Below, a few Hollywood Writers share their thoughts

Our next meeting is Thursday, March 26th at the Fairfax Public Library, 161 South Gardner St.  LA 90036. Gardner is just off West Third Street -- between Fairfax and La Brea Avenues. There’s a Seven-Eleven on the corner of south Gardner and Third, turn there.  Start time is 6:30 pm, meeting ends at 7:45pm.





Bonnie Berry LaMon: “Author Rainbow Rowell’s Eleanor and Park is set in the 1980’s. I believe it resonates with adults as well as teens, because it captures the magic of a first love. Eleanor and Park are very different people, and each has a difficult home life.  At first, they don’t even like each other but as they grow in friendship, they feel that special magic—the first stirrings of love. Told in alternating viewpoints, like Jandy Nelson’s I’ll Give You the Sun, the reader has a complete picture of all the complications and issues Eleanor and Park face, even when they themselves can’t identify their problems and are unable to solve them.”
      


   
Sarah Kapp: “My Name is Memory by Anne Brashares tells an adventurous, unique love story that transcends time. Daniel remembers his many past lives from all over the world and the girl he has loved throughout his lives. In present time, Daniel recognizes his past love, now named Lucy, at the high school they both attend. Scenes from their varied and tumultuous past incarnations are interwoven with their present chance at love, along with the evil force that seems to always force them apart.”        




Carolina Nalasco: "Romance is not the only thing that draws me to romance novels. I like to read the ones that blend in a bigger, more pressing problem than simply two people meeting, breaking up and meeting again.  In Black City,  author Elizabeth Richards, ties political unrest into the romance, thus upping the ante for the protagonists. While some may  consider it a typical romance a la Twilight,  the built in political tension, along with the romance, makes for a gripping read."



Annie Calhoun: "Author Linda Sue Park’s A Single Shard is a YA romance novel that explores different kinds of love. There is the romance potter Min has with the clay. This relationship, between artist and material, is fraught with quarrels and the pursuit of perfection. Then there’s the maternal love Min feel for Tree Ear. The author goes on to unveil a friendship kind of love, between Crane Man and Tree Ear.  This book is not the typical Valentine’s Day selection, but after I put it down I felt as though I was brimming over with love, which is, I think, the point of a romance!"

                   
Jean Perry: "I like to come to a book raw and innocent; unknowing and unsuspecting. I read neither back copy, nor front flap. It’s the first few sentences I’m looking for. The connection must be instant and must promise a strong lead character. So when I read the first sentence of April Lindner’s Jane, and behold, I was Jane, was in her body, saw as she saw and felt as she felt, I was sold. Lindner drives the plot bus all the way to the climax and satisfying ending with Jane guiding the reader, providing that invisible netting that unifies a book. Jane’s relationship with her rock star employer put me inside a romance strewn with hard times, and a hard boiled lover, who is at once disgusting, yet redeemable."


--Jean Perry, Co-coordinator, Hollywood Schmooze
http://jeanperrywrites@gmail.com 
--Deborah Fletcher Blum, Co-coordinator Hollywood Schmooze
http://fletcher01blum@yahoo.com



Friday, February 27, 2015

REVISE REVISE REVISE at SCHMOOZE SCHMOOZE SCHMOOZE in Santa Clarita


REVISE REVISE REVISE at SCHMOOZE SCHMOOZE SCHMOOZE in Santa Clarita

by Cindy Marcus

The amazing and inspiring Laurisa White Reyes lead the Santa Clarita Schmoozers this month, sharing her insights and wisdom in the challenging art of revision.  Wow.  Writers walked away with many helpful handouts as well as usable hints on how to approach the intimidating process of revising their novels.  When broken down into Laurisa’s handy dandy three-step process, revising just seemed so do-able, though time consuming.  However, Laurisa reminded us that time consuming is part of the writing journey as can be tediousness, but it’s that kind of dedication that turns a book from lumpy coal to a shiny diamond.  Not only that, revision is really important.  Competition is fierce and it’s important to put your best “word” forward.  

To begin the revision process, you start with Step One.  This is the developmental stage of revision, which involves making sweeping changes like revising plot, replacing character, examining pacing.  After the sweeping changes have been made, it’s time to check for words usage and grammar usage.  A good tip was to use that search bar in your document to find out just how many times you are using a word.  Or go to wordle.org.  The word “was” can be way overused.   The last stage, is proofreading.  Here you check for spelling and punctuation.  Laurisa also shared the most common mistakes to avoid, like its vs. it’s.  (its is possessive and it’s is “it is”).
She wrapped up with her 6-tips for effective revision, like read it aloud, or have a friend or your child read it to you.  And don’t be afraid to seek out a professional.  Editors can be expensive, but you don’t have to pay for their entire services, maybe pick and chose what you think your book will need.  Does it need a sweeping revision or a line edit?  Getting a professional’s eyes on it is always worth it - as are beta readers.

What a great schmooze.  Can’t wait for next month!

Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Diary of a Wimpy Schmooze Coordinator (AKA The Westside Writers Novel Critique Schmooze Recap)




February 11, 2015—2:57 PM

Man, I am so burned out on this whole annual novel critique thing. If I wasn’t co-coordinator I’d probably just skip it. I mean, it’s fine for young, productive people who still have hopes and dreams; real writers who manage to move from one project to the next instead of working on the same stupid book for more years than I even want to admit. Am I really going to bring those same 4 pages? Sure, I’ve done some revising since last year but really, what’s the point? Those pages have been polished so many times it’ll just be everyone saying how much they like them, and I’ll puff up, start pontificating and forget that my real problems are later and structural until I get home and realize what happened and start to hate myself for the whole big ego thing… On the other hand, if I don’t bring anything, I’ll really feel like a loser who can’t even put himself on the line when he’s asking everyone else to—I mean what’s wrong with me? What’s WRONG with me?

Maybe I’ll call Karol and tell her I’m under the weather….


February 12, 2015—12:32 AM

That was great! I’m so glad Karol didn’t let me wuss out (though she didn’t have to be so mean about it). First of all, there were so many new writers there. Of the 26 people attending it seemed like a third of them were newbies. And then, at my table at least, they were all really talented. Everyone had different and amazing stories (many with a strain of animalism that was fascinating), and everyone really listened, hungry for useful criticism. Even better, the comments were all pretty deep and thoughtful. As for my stupid pages, it kinda started out like I said, with me pontificating. But then I reminded myself to shut up and listen, and I found out about some very clear missteps in my first paragraph that implied my main character was younger than he is. A few Schmoozers had a global idea that, while interesting, doesn’t really work given the nature of the book. Still in all, it was a great and revealing night, and everyone there seemed to find it as much fun as I did.


February 21, 2015---3:00 PM

Just got back from a bike ride and somewhere along Mulholland I realized that the Schmoozer’s global idea was actually terrific and solves some of my structural problems. It doesn’t quite work the way they suggested it, but with a bit of tweaking, it’s freaking brilliant! I don’t know why I thought I was burned out on SCBWI. It’s awesome! 


February 21, 2015—3:37 PM

Ugh! I am so burned out on SCBWI! While I was in the shower, Karol left a message asking if I’d take the lead on this month’s blog (since she’s taken the lead on the last two and she’s busy setting up the panel for next month’s Schmooze).  I meanI love going, I love leading it and I love talking. But why do I have to have responsibilities? And anyway, what’d she do for last month's blog? Just got a lot of people to write in what they thought.  Of course, that required effort too, with emailing and such. Hmm, how can I get out of this…?

Ha!  I know!! I’ll just publish this stupid journal, unedited! And then, at the end invite everyone to tell about their experiences at their own tables in the “Comments” section!  Problem solved! 

Oh, I am good!!  Now it’s off to revise my book, which I’m oddly excited to do—gotta love SCBWI!


 ...There you have it Schmoozers - a scary look into the tortured (yet somehow lovable) mind of one of your "fearful" leaders.

We have an AMAZING Schmooze planned for March 11:

What To Expect When You’re Expecting (A Best-Selling Book To Magically Appear on Bookstore Shelves/eReaders)

             -- A panel of first time authors will take us through the various steps in the publication process, from receiving an offer through the book’s release.

Seriously, you do NOT want to miss this one...or ANY one, really.

Until the, keep passing the open windows,
Charlie & Karol

Saturday, February 14, 2015

Westside Illustrators Schmooze News



Come Join us....
  Westside Illustrators Schmooze!

WHEN: Monday evening, February 16, 2015
                        7:00pm to 9:00pm

WHERE: 445 15th Street, Santa Monica CA 90402
  
                  A two story Spanish-style private home. 
                 5 blocks north of Wilshire,  between Montana & San Vicente.
                   Free residential street parking!
TOPICS: 'The 2015 Schmaldecott Awards!'
                         Let's study more 2014 books & the
                         actual Caldecott
& Newberry winners
                              !Ceremony and celebration! 
                         Bring in books to share!
                         Scour the library for 2014 books    

                 'Your Website, part 1!'
                         Our Schmooze begins getting you up and running.
                         Discussion of ideas for
improving existing
                                 websites and blogs


Let's enjoy a fun creative evening together
& move forward in our common pursuit
of making a contribution to the world of
children's illustration and literature!
   

Continuing monthly topics:     

"Doodle a Day "
continues! 
 
"Dream Big... Start Small!"   with baby steps!
 
RSVP if you can ...  SuzyBlock@gmail.com 
MARCH
MEETING Monday evening, March 23, 2015
See you soon.... Suzy8-)

SuzyEngelmanBlock.com
SCBWI Coordinator
Westside Illustrators Schmooze

Friday, February 6, 2015

Hollywood Schmooze Discusses Common Core

To write clear prose, without holding back challenging vocabulary and intricate concepts, might be the goal of writers aiming to align their work with Common Core standards.

 At their January meeting, Hollywood Schmoozers listened to and then questioned  Kipp Scholar Academy teacher Annie Calhoun, as she  discussed  California State Education Standards in English Language Arts.

She spoke at the Fairfax Branch of the Los Angeles Public Library, 161 South Gardner Street in LA.

Bottom line for writers: our task is to write the best stories we can.

Common Core refers to the standards, or level of achievement, the State expects students to demonstrate in academics, from kindergarten through grade twelve. The California Department of Education (CDE) and the State Superintendent of Public Instruction, are overseeing implementation of the Common Core State Standards (CCSS).

Examples of  standards include language such as: student will build knowledge through content rich non-fiction.

Translation, student will read a science text. Student will highlight information called for in a test question, and then write a response, as opposed to selecting an answer from a multiple choice list.


Calhoun suggested that schmoozers go to www.corestandards.org and www.smarterbalanced.org  to learn more.

The term smarter balanced refers to the state-led consortium working to develop assessments based on Common Core standards. Go to: http://www.cde.ca.gov/re/cc  for more info.

According to Annie, Spring 2015 standardized testing will be presented online.

Students will need to be able to: read text on a computer, highlight material within the text that answers  test questions, click and drag highlighted material--as well as their own notes-- and write a response based on the relevant material .  The response may range from one sentence to five paragraphs, depending on grade level.

Annie  Calhoun teaches at Kipp Scholar Academy, a public charter, middle school, in South Los Angeles.

--Jean Perry, Hollywood Schmooze Co-coordinator
--Deborah Fletcher Blum, Hollywood Schmooze Co-coordinator



Wednesday, February 4, 2015

[Insert creative and pithy title for the Westside Writers Schmooze picture book critique recap here]




Karol:  Ah, crap, Charlie.  It’s time for another critique night recap.
Charlie:  Um, is it?
Karol:  YES, Charlie.  What are we supposed to do?  I mean, we really knocked it outta the park with our first one in 2012 (http://socalschmooze.blogspot.com/2012/02/once-upon-time-westside-writers.html)
Charlie:  2012!?  Have we been at this for THAT long?
Karol:  Yup.  2013’s recap was pretty creative, too (http://socalschmooze.blogspot.com/2013/04/straight-from-schmoozers-mouths.html).  But then last year, though the PBC Schmooze with the “illustrators in Residence” gimmick was pretty spectacular, we totally phoned in the blog with a 3-Schmooze recap FIVE months after the fact (http://socalschmooze.blogspot.com/2014/08/westside-writers-schmooze-finishing-out.html)
Charlie:  Yeah, but it had that cool gif from The Shining!
Karol:  Focus, Charlie.  What are we gonna do?  How can we possibly phone it in any more than we already have in the past?


Charlie:  Hit up a few Schmoozers to write little blurbs about their experiences at the PBC Schmooze and “call it a blog”…?
Karol:  OMG – that’s brilliant!!
Charlie:  Sloth and avoidance don’t just happen, Karol.  You have to work at them.

GREETINGS lovely Schmooze Blog readership! We present to you now our recap of the Picture Book Critique Schmooze (through the eyes of its participants):


We give you the Picture Book Critique Schmooze through the eyes of the participants:

 I was ready to query. My manuscript had been revised and noted and re-revised and re-noted...and, well, you get the idea. What could my fellow critiquers say except, “Brilliant! I hope you’ve already started querying with such a masterpiece on your hands!”
           
They will say it’s too long! It’s wayyyy too long! QUIET down voice in the back of my mind! I keep telling you, it’s ready to go!
           
So, what did my fellow Schmoozers say? It was awesome! ... And long. Wayyyy too long to submit for queries. Then they helped me figure out what to trim so I could keep the heart of my work intact. They gave me the objectivity that I needed after having been with the story for so long.
           
Since the critique, I’ve been able to cut my manuscript nearly in half. And today, I finally sent out those queries! We shall see how it goes, but at least I know I’ve sent out something that even the voice in the back of my mind is proud of.
           
Sometimes you just need some really smart people to tell you what you refuse to hear. Thanks SCBWI Westside Schmooze!­­


As my first ever in-person critique, the experience was immensely valuable.

There are obvious benefits to receiving constructive feedback from your peers. For instance, in hearing my story read aloud, I keyed into weaknesses that I’d missed during my own readings (and re-readings). The group called out additional spots needing repair, and together we brainstormed on possible solutions. This process was made painless by the care everyone took to be supportive and kind in their recommendations.

Getting a notebook full of suggestions was great, but the second (and my favorite) benefit was learning where my writing was already successful. My group pointed out exactly which lines were
strong and connected with them. This gave me a glimpse of what good writing can achieve and encouraged me to keep revising.

Perhaps the least obvious benefit is the one you get when you give (rather than receive) feedback. As with reading published picture books, my group’s unique voices and fresh styles inspired me. But something else happens when you not only read but analyze a story. You get better at identifying the differences between writing that sparkles and writing that needs a polish. And this skill kicks in when you sit down to type. Giving critiques evolves your writing.

For these and many more reasons, I encourage everyone to participate in a critique Schmooze.

--Sarah Harroff


My experience at the Westside Writers Schmooze Critique Group on January 14, 2015 was both exciting and rewarding. I was impressed by the strong attendance of writers and the organization of multiple tables for small groups to work together. The instructions provided before we began set the stage for a cooperative team approach.
           
The critique group I participated in consisted of five writers. Of these, four writers had picture book stories for critique. The feedback that I received was of great value. First, it was supportive of my story and writing. Secondly, it was specific in offering me new ideas to consider. The ideas were aimed at strengthening characters and story content.
           
I appreciated that the critique group writers were respectful, direct with feedback, and attentive to one another’s work.
--Frank X. Acosta


The January SCBWI LA Westside Writers' picture book critique Schmooze was wonderful.  I have to say that I was impressed and delighted by the stories shared.  This time I was at a table with pre-published as well as published authors and the quality of the feedback was excellent. Our group discussed a variety of animal stories, a fantastical tale in rhyme, and a creative nonfiction manuscript. Everyone was so supportive and everyone was so insightful and supportive.


My own manuscript had already been through several drafts and a couple of critique groups, but the writers at the Schmooze helped me to cut out even more extraneous lines. And voila! There was the perfect surprise ending for my story. It was in the manuscript the whole time, but I didn't see it until the writers at the Schmooze pointed it out. Hooray for the Schmooze!

--Andrea J. Loney 



A few grisly old-timers chimed in as well:


I always find it a useful evening. There was a teacher at our table (can't remember her name,) and she had some very insightful things to say. Also, we had an illustrator (can't remember her name, either,) and I appreciated her viewpoint, too. All in all, it's a great way to get fresh eyes on your work.
--Laurie Young

I had Greg Pincus and Andrea at my table and some other very lovely and insightful people. Off to do another rewrite. This is always a great evening. I just wished I could have heard everyone's book!
--Susan Berger

We had two newbies and two experienced writers at our table. I have to say that I was really impressed with all the work presented that evening. The incomparable Rita read each text aloud with verve and enthusiasm. I agree with Laurie - it's really helpful to writers to have a fresh eye - and ear - review your work.
--Joan Charles

What Joan said! (And thank you!) I was really impressed with the work at our table as well.
--Rita Crayon Huang

Laurie, Sue, Joan & Rita:  Who you calling grisly & old?!?!

Ooops!  Sorry.  We meant “grisly old-timers” in the sense that you’re all creative geniuses who’ve been around long enough to have thick skin and really know your stuff!

Charlie:  Do you think they’ll buy that?
Karol:  Beats me

Time for us to make our getaway!


Join us for the Novel Critique Schmooze on Wednesday, February 11th and until then…

Keep passing the open windows,

Charlie & Karol